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The Cycle of Being BetterWhy does everyone seem to make it on their own?
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In the crowd, he would bleed, screaming, "Someone, please!"
No. I don't see someone like that - except for this disordered cat.
Two young boys, they throw the poor kit, down in the rushing river.
The cat, it dies. It dies in the hands of those who think it is weak.
Yet aren't we the same? We humiliate the weak.
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We pressure him to save himself,
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Tactician Jenroby =yami-joey

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Cartoons / Vector

How this turned out was really epic and.... unbelievable.
I really thought how I made this one was awesome, something I never thought was possible. Nothing up to par with some of the more awesome artworks out there, but still cool, I think, nonetheless.

Jenro is my OC. This one has a more Fire Emblem-like style to it compared to my other artwork of him.

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Critique by *MandieEllie Dec 29, 2012, 8:37:27 PM

What is Awesome~!
You did an excellent job on catching character, you can really see he is a bit of a scholar. Maybe even a magic user. Your cell shading is very well done, it really shows the folds and texture in the clothing. the bright blue book is a nice touch, it takes away from the darker colors a brightens up the mood. The background is a nice touch.

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Anatomy is one, the head seems big for its body and the arm seems slightly out of place. Maybe take a step further and work on your facial detail. The eyes are very well done, maybe add eyelashes in his case they would be facing down to look like a man, you don't want them flicked up.

Good Job~!

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