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In My Weakness

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In My Weakness

She broke my heart
I love her
Yet she didn't,
Tears fell down,
and I'm falling apart.

Saw me in my weakness,
my friends, they were,
Yet they ridiculed
my masculinity
In that time of my sadness.

I wiped my tears
my face lit up,
at least I tried,
I tried hard,
...I lifted my pride.
A poem I've made about a young man's weakness, and how his friends would ridicule him for showing that weakness...

Which I find would lead to wrong things for this young man...

Comments are very appreciated. :)
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